i like that.One suggestion to the technical part ...i think there isnt enough blur to the Enteprise so the rock and the ship looks the same distance,if i was you i would blur the rock from the bottom to the top so the Model of enteprise will be the first thing that your eyes focus on !
Yeah, sense of scale and location can be tricky with shots like this. I took your advice - sorta - and tweaked it a bit. But I'm not sure it's a really fixable issue... (... or maybe I'm just feeling too lazy, at the moment )
Thanks! I'm not quite sure how I'd define the composition. Maybe there's something of "the rule of thirds" at play, but as with most of my stuff the functional approach ends up being "wiggle stuff around until it looks right"